Motherf*cker!
Yeah, gets you from the start, but the hightunes at the beginning are a little bit flat and in my opinion don't fit after all. Also the bass sounded blank.
Some pretty heavy riffs in there, nice little sweeping, tempochanges and funny ending. ;)
Keep you the good shit. fuck you 5.
Well, constructive criticism is ok for me, as long as it isn't too offensive. Thanks for the heads up!
HAHAHA the ending is fucking funny. I can play that sound backwards and it makes me crease-up laughing!
Thanks for the 5!!
Harmonics...ryhthm
I think one of your main problems are the above ones. The track begins good, but then the pipes and the keyboard comes in and they make the track crappy.
So yeah
The alternative Version of it is better I think. This one is not very harmonic, some parts don't fit, like the bongos, and it's way too fast.
Yea, I must say I liked the alternative better too.
Yeah!
So, yeah...people are gonna hate me for this review (buaah) :(
Don't get me wrong, you do good stuff, but overall you should work more on the structur of your songs.
Doomsday, Sleep no More, Stone Angel and False Memory sound preety equal in their sturctur to each othter. Aspecially False Memory and Stone Angel ("The Wait" riff)
I mean, you often know exactly what comes next. Not, that it is bad, but a tracks even kick more ass, when your getting blowed away with something unexpected. ;)
Anyways, thats for the critics, and now for the good things. The clarity is very good, also the drums. The riffs are easy, but played well. For a 15 year old, your doing a good job.
Overall here it's a 7, but in the end I give you 4/5 + download.
Well thanks for the constructive critsizm. And thanks for the complements. It's nice to get helpful feedback from a fellow musician rather then some kid saying it sucked. Thanks again for your review.
Good!
Yepp thats it. Could have a litte bit more diversity in it but I like it how it is. The Intro is nice. Could be good for flash. One thing that bothers is the ending because it's abrupt. 4/5.
fuzzyness!
Drums were pretty cool but the guitar is waay to fuzzy. The Track is simple and solid, it has potential. Could be a little more variety in it, but apart from that it's ok! 4/5.
As far as the fuzziness of my guitar playing, I blame that on my inability to pick the right EQ settings on my distortion. I do intend to re-record and re-release this song though. This one's merely a demo now. But anyway, I appreciate your input.
You like...
monkeys, do you? A real strange tune. 1/5
wooah dude, even my small mind can work out 6/10=3/5 and u gave me a 1.
Good!
Another depresant thingy. ^^ Really like these sort of tunes. Could be a little more diversified, but it's ok how it is. I give it 4/5.
Thanks alot... I guess.... Yeah it could have had a little more diversity, but I think it came out just fine. Thanks for your review, and vote!
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