Quite ok! :/
Woah, the clarity was really bad! Very much treble in this...even on the drums. Seems like you compressed the hell out of each. Not very clever. The loop itself was good but the sound was just bad and thats your minus points on this.
Drums with good old Beatcrap? lol, yeah...it works out for the start. I recommend that you change to EZdrummer. Fucking nice plug-in. >:)
Overall...ok loop, bad mixing/mastering! 3/5
Keep it up!