Tasty!
Pretty good for a first real shot at writting lyrics. They are clear and you can follow them without any problems. You got a decent voice too. I assume you did the little chorus here and there as well.
A very calming piece. It kinda reminds me of a "beatles!?" song somehow, even the fact that I didn't listen to them very much. lol XD
Anyways, great sound and overall something downloadable for sure! (And I'm going to download this for sure). Only thing you may could think of is to add a little reverb over the voice track, in case you haven't already.
Other than that it's perfect the way it is!
Great work dude! Keep em coming!
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 5 for Jekyll and Hyde, keeping its score at 5.00.