Not bad!
Some advices though. What are you using for the drums? Beatcraft I assume. It sounds like that. ^^ The drumbeat was nice, catchy with the guitar. Though, I only hear your guitars "ones". Lemme guess you recorded a guitar track but centered it? To me, it sounds like that.
For a more decent sound, record two tracks or copy the track you did and pan your guitars to left and right. Also your guitar tone...not a good tone for metal, more distortion man! :)
Overall, it's not a bad tune, needs some polish though. Oh yeah, if you really use beatcraft for the drums, could you send me the project file from your drum beat? I wanna play with it a bit if it is ok for you. ^^
I like the beat and you did well with the drums...sooo...4/5. ;)
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