Quite ok!
You know, the structure itself was pretty good, though...the sample aren't at all. :/ Some sound very blank, especially the guitar synth and also the drums. It could work as a game tune in a cave level or something. It's even good for a certain scene with dialogue.
But then again, those are only my thoughts on this.
Good job on the mix and structure but overall it could use some more tweaking. Good luck for the contest!
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 4 for -WritersBlock-Golden Gates, keeping its score at 4.00.