Help! My bottle is empty! :(
This is a really cool ballad man! It's what I expect from ya! Cool stuff! :)
The structure as some already mentioned is well thought and couldn't be improved more! It's perfect for this! The vokills from XxCrucifiedxX fit in like beer with chips. :D
Though...I thought you two would do a duet...I think it would have been even better on this, seeing that this is about struggle. Hope you can catch my drift there! ;)
Now comes the bitching part! :D Not really but some pointers. The drums are fine in the mix, just like the rhythm guitar. Though, bass could be a bit more up or eq'd a bit different for more...bass. ;)
Now the leads TOTALLY drown in this. Mostly they just are there for a background addition, which is rather sad. If you line them up more with the vocals up front, I'm sure you'll get a nice contrast! Also, if it's about struggle...I think a panner effect on the leads would be very cool on certain parts (like in the verses for example).
The bridge blends in very nicely for the solo. A little time there to reflect the lyrics and all before it burts in to the little solo. For the end part...Let it, just like the vocals - delay it all out for like 5 or 6 this with a fade. It's a bit to abrupt for my taste as it is now. That way you could smooth it out even more.
A good end, is a good beginning! ;)
Overall, this is a fucking cool song and it'll surely make the way on my mp3 player or winamp. ;D
4.37 / 5.00 (+ 0.049)
Nice one bro! <3