In your eye sockets! Right there man, right on! Swell appetizer of your album! Hope you get something out of it. Oh, why looky there, your F-Zero cover went platinum. OMG. Nice one. ;D
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 5 for Choosing the Door [exerpts], raising its score from 4.00 to 4.50.
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Well it works, not that fine but it works. I hate synth guitars and a lot of people know about it. You as well now. >:(
By remix I assume you mean "cover", cause it's an actual cover of the tune itself. If you want to hear a decent metal version of the tune check FlameMesial's version!
I just hope you programmed all this stuff in GP 5 by yourself. Otherwise it would be very unoriginal. I just assume you put some effort into it but I can't give you more than 3/5 since the overall sound etc. is very poor. :(
Though, keep it up!
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 3 for F-Zero X : White Land, lowering its score from 3.50 to 3.33.
...yeah, synth guitars aren't very great. And yes, I know FlameMesial's version wich is excellent and much better than mine. Oh damn ! I forgot to write him a review. Please, if you see him, tell him that I'll left a review for his cover of "white land".
...oh and by the way, I've programmed it myself. I haven't found any MIDI tracks about it... and if it was the case, I couldn't put it in GP 5. It doesn't work...
...Well, thanks for the review, DarKsidE555 ! Hope you'll left more reviews !
Nice wobbeling beginning of the bass with the constant rotary. What bugs me like hell is the guitar on the right. The notes you played sounded blank and just not well fitting for this kind of tune...annoying even. Maybe a warmer sound from the guitar itself or a little sfx could correct that issue.
The drums were a little weak in the mix. Basicly the kick but they are programmed very well.
Overall, nice tune there man! Congrats on weekly #2. (You basturd) ;D
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 5 for Treasure These Moments, raising its score from 4.13 to 4.22.
yea that bass is a rhodes setting from rhino, the sines and triangles just werent fitting right. Meh i get what you mean about that riff, maybe you'd have preferred a bit more bite to it and some more technique? Each to their own innit. Yea drums aint perfect, think thats a choice of sounds, certainly requires a deeper kick bass i wholeheartedly agree. and they were arranged in FL and applied with the glitch plugin which i then arranged. much fun !
haha yea that #2 was my 2nd in two weeks.
thanks for the review. pm me with anything you'd like my opinions on.
Well, Techno isn't usually my resort but I have to say that I enjoyed this one very much. Reminds me of Dimrain a little, which is good. lol.
Anyways, the tune had a nice overall sound. Maybe the volume output could have been lowered -1db to give it a little more headroom but other than that, it was nicely done. The synths / samples had a good tone and didn't sound flat or anything.
The end was a little bit uninspired, hende the fade-out. ;)
Not a big problem at all. I just expected something else.
Overall, a cool tune. Keep it up!
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 5 for Taking On Tomorrow, raising its score from 4.71 to 4.75.
LOL that sems to be a constant problem with my techno...i never try to hard with the endings XD But, im just about to post a new song, and it kinda draws to an actual close...but theres still a fade XD
Thanks for the revewi and the vote man ^^
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Your drums? Or did Bad_Man lay a hand here? ;D I guess those are drums by my old fart. haha. If not, good work on them, nice overall tone.
Sadly, the guitar tone didn't satisfied me. Very blurry to say at least. Give your guitar a little more compression do get it pumped up. Also, double the guitar layers for a thicker sound and don't forget to start EQ'ing your shit asap. You'll hear the difference. The riffs were pretty simple, though, they made their job.
Practice a little bit more on the solo, since it sounded more like a jam around then a structured solo to slap someone with. ;D
The structure of the tune was good and for your first real one it came out great.
Keep it up! :D
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 4 for Fallen Shadows, lowering its score from 4.25 to 4.20.
ya i did the drums and the main reason the guitar sounded bad is because i have a $1 mic. once i get a good mic i'll make some good quality songs
thx for the review i'll take these pointers into mind
Yeah, sounds more industrial than metal to me but it's cool. As mentioned in bad_man's review, it was chaotic but fitting the same time. Lyrics plz? Or was it just random shit?
A let-down in this tune was...The "kick". It was way to overdone in the mix. It's kinda annoying really.
The rest is just fucking psycho. Could fit well in an experimental flash or some sort. Nice sound as well.
Something different, yet refreshing.
Keep it up man!
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 5 for Unstoppable (effortless vox), raising its score from 4.00 to 4.17.
Yeah, I would say it's more than likely both genre, but they don't really allow "multi-classes" on ng, so I picked what I felt it was closet to.
I also can understand people's aversion to my drumming. I know it overwhelms the songs and can even take away from everything else in it. While I do understand the problem, I can't say I'm gonna change it much. I love heavy drums, but I can see what you mean with the "kick". It is a bit loud, and does get monotonous after awhile.
I appreciate your critique and I will keep it in mind for future projects. Thanks for your compliments as well (+ the 5 & 10)! I appreciate your awesome review and you can bet I sure as hell will keep it up!
:::::LYRICS::::::
-VERSE 1-
I'll be the one to survive!
Never look back, not once!
I'm a legend, I'm a hero!
I'm a soldier, I'm a hitman!
an Undertaker!
HEY! HEY!
Stand up-
HEY! HEY!
Stand up- (I will survive)
HEY!
And I'll knock you down!
HEY!
-CHORUS x2-
You have no chance (not one),
I am not afraid!
I am not gonna die down here!
HEY! (x8)
(never look... not once)
-REPEAT FIRST VERSE-
-CHORUS x2-
I will never give in,
I will never give up,
I will never give in,
I will never give up,
because you got no chance...
when you face... me!
(never look back... not once)
-CHORUS x2-
I'll be the one to survive!
-VERSE 2-
I've blazed a trail of death!
They know my name,
I am not one of you,
I am not the same!
I have seen this path,
I know what I walk,
you can knock me down,
but I'll rise again!
-CHORUS-
I am not gonna die- DOWN HERE!
you have no chance (not one),
I am not afraid!
(YOU HAVE NO CHANCE!)
(I'll be the one to survive!)
you have no chance (not one),
I am not afraid!
you have no chance (not one),
I am not afraid!
(I am a hero!)
you have no chance (not one),
I am not afraid!
(I am a soldier!)
you have no chance (not one),
I am not afraid!
(an undertaker!)