Not bad!
Liked the beginning. Though, the tune is roughly mixed. Most important thing, watch your master output level. It should be around -1 or -2 db to keep the track decent. It clips a lot, mostly because of the base drum. I don't know if that was in your intent but to me it just sounds wrong. The bass is barely hearable, guitars are also way too loud compared to the rest.
The track has a good structure though, nice to listen too but it needs some more work to count it as a winner. Not the playing, the problem is the mastering. Practice that more and I'm sure you can hit shit in the future. ;)
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 4 for Blazing Cold (bass reduced), lowering its score from 4.57 to 4.50.