Welcome! ^^
First sub and not a bad one, though it's short. Well, what can I suggest? I noticed that the intro "clipped" a bit. Might checking your channel volumes again? :) The kick is nice and pumping, good feeling you got ongoing by far. Maybe eq the snare a bit more? Can't really give you good help here because I'm an acoustical not electronical artist. ;)
Let's see what you will do with the full track. :D
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