A few suggestion...
Not bad for the start. First off all, it clips, whats not that good. Usually your final master tune should be at a volume around -2 or -1 db. Your guitar tone sounds ok but I guess you could have EQ it a bit better (that will come with the experience for sure) ;)
Also the drums sound not that great in the tone. What do you use? Beatcraft? The snair has a bit too much reverb on it.
Overall - Good job on finally getting a "real" guitar! ;)
Give it a 3/5. I'm looking forward for your future subs. man ^^
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE_555! You voted 3 for Gang raped with a rusty spoon, raising its score from 2.50 to 2.67.